Friday, September 21, 2007

Dusked

Whizzing homeward past a popular pavement

where people meet, i said to myself

Aretheyreallyinlove space helooksreligious space aretheygayorishedrunk space she's waiting...

toddling child, don't let mama go

dust cloud and that there mite i be

corn seller man, call it a day

3 comments:

phish said...

perchanced. life in vacation is tedious. and yet found the time to read this over six times. in the last ten minutes.

Dancing with Felicity said...

Ah. What I must ask is whether you're still reading it now. :)

B said...

Dunno why I didnt write here earlier...loved the poem...bt I guess 'twas jst too ethereal to dissect..poignant...the description is so real that I always remember these lines when I travel down the road frm my home to yours, literally...it's the rock-fountain that brings me back to reality...to today..